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The Spark Within A Dying Flame

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The Girl Who Lept by Hiinote, literature

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The Girl Who Lept

One day, unconsciously and without knowing it, I lept from a skyscraper The breath was knocked out of me And I hoped to grow wings For I had wished to take flight. Unfortunately, although I grew wings, They were deformed and wretched. They were barely avian. And as they were stretched, Rather than taking flight, I descended quickly. I fell into the night. I crashed and I stumbled. I consistently collided. I got lost in the sable mass And forgot the meaning of "delighted." I tossed and I turned. I tumbled and fell. Mauve patches were forming. My actions still knell. Lost in the darkness In the shadow of what was once "me." I am nameless and fo

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The Flower by Hiinote, literature

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The Flower

"I'm sorry" is a phrase I say too often For I frequently make mistakes Even despite my attempts. I'm not in control of myself Nor my impulsiveness So I hope you understand. I get it if you think it's hokum But I fail to have control And I'm endlessly terrorized. For there was once a flower that blossomed Until it's hope was taken. It now rots and withers It was trampled and forgotten. That flower is now broken. It's dilapidated and rotten.

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Terrorism

I become so happy And so filled with light Yet they put out the fire That was glowing so bright. I would speak out in class And fail to do my work. I was told to try harder And that I was a jerk. My handwriting remains atrocious. I continue to make careless mistakes. I'm told I will amount to nothing. I'm told I'm a disgrace. These people project such foul words Through the corrupted mouths of theirs. Yet if they thought them they must be true And that's what I just can't bear. Yes, I may speak when something excites me. Yes, I may fail to do my work. And, yes, I may be impulsive and I may have poor penmanship But even if I make careless err

Dear Democracy by Hiinote, literature

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Dear Democracy

Dear democracy, You contain so much hypocrisy. You're so perplexed. That's an understatement. You're uneducated And overrated. You take the life of a child And bring them "under your wing," But under your wing there are needles That claim there's hope they'll bring. You state you will help an adolescent -- That you will work for their good future -- Yet you throw around their life And cause them strife So much so that they draw near stupor. Oh, dear democracy, Democracy filled with such hypocrisy, The people who strive for such power Are normally the ones who abuse it most, So you cause citizens strife And take away their life When these a

The Crystallization of the Lost Child by Hiinote, literature

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The Crystallization of the Lost Child

There was once a little girl Who was alone and lost in her own world And one day she ran off Deep into the undergrowth where her feelings unfurled But she fled too far into the thicket So the thicket consumed her and became her new world But within that world there was an eerie silence It made her head whirl There wasn't even the chirp of a cricket Everything seemed to swirl Until one day she came upon a spider It was a sign of life -- another survivor Therefore, she gravitated toward it She believed its words And fell for its trick But, at the last minute, she discovered its plot So she dashed off, in the name of the life she "sought" The

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It Plays On

It Plays On The notes of a song in the mind of a child Free as the wind as it crosses the skies Sing for the joy of a life just beginning To let loose the spirit that nestles inside Play now the lyrics of learning and growing Silly the words that are shaping your time Lessons are learned in notes and in phrases They will be with you the rest of your lives Play now the marches and drums of rebellion Cast from the visions of things you see true Seek to run far from the walls of the elder Defiant and proud are the notes that call you Cry now the cadence of sorrow and heartbreak Whisper the rhythm alone and apart Then learn the t

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About Me:

I am Hinote, The Spark Within A Dying Flame

If you need a person to talk to, feel free to send me a note. I won't mind, and I certainly won't judge you for anything you say. I know how it feels to want to speak with someone, but every time you try no one seems to listen. So I'm willing to be anyone's friend and to speak with anyone who would like to speak with me. ^^

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Favourite Movies

In Time

Favourite TV Shows

The Big Bang Theory

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

Owl City, Skillet

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The Scarlet Ibis

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World Of Warcraft

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PS3, Computer

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Hiinote

May 24, 2015

Poetry

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    I've decided I'm going to start writing poetry and submitting it. I have written poetry before, but I've never actually published, uploaded, or submitted it. I felt that if I were to do so then I could get feedback on it to make improvement.    My poetry is melancholy for the most part. At times it is macabre. Almost every poem I make has something to do with life and death.    Not all of my poetry is based off personal feelings, but sometimes it is. I love writing poetry because it gives me a way to express myself and it gives me a way to vent. I have a feeling I am going to get some negativity for choosing to write poetry, but there

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Feb 3, 2015

Vegetarianism

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(This journal entry is dedicated to Ramen Noodles. I'm so sorry I've lost you, my friend. I will come back... Probably.) I know. Of all things I would end up doing a journal on, it's this. Well I would like to state that ribs, steak, wings, chicken, beef, pork, and so on and so forth are all very dear to me. Plus, it IS a journal, in my defense. Anywho, my parents have decided we're going to become vegetarians because meat is evil and it should die. Okay, maybe not exactly for that reason. The real reason is because it causes an unrealistic amount of health problems. Frankly, one of the foods that is very dear to me known as Ramen Noodle

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Jan 23, 2015

Inactivity Notice

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Due to school and things going on around me, I've struggled to have open time to create and update. I would like to warn that I may not be able to be online much currently. Sorry about that. I do tend to get spare time in the weekends, though. I will most likely post things around that time. Sorry once more for the inconvenience.